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Authored by:fleecebeast on Thursday, June 08 2006 @ 11:11 am PDT
Thank you It's only one part of a larger work, that isn't necessarily a poem either, an amalgamation of words, imges and actions- the living work; is how I would like to present it, it's tough, but see I remember writing something similar- harken back to that time y'all called me for Buffalo and I read: indeed, who is sending and who is receiving? This poem is redundant because somewhere I guess the point I want to make isn't clear or sharp enough.
The following comments are owned by whomever posted them. This site is not responsible for what they say.
It's only one part of a larger work, that isn't necessarily a poem either, an amalgamation of words, imges and actions- the living work; is how I would like to present it, it's tough, but see I remember writing something similar- harken back to that time y'all called me for Buffalo and I read: indeed, who is sending and who is receiving? This poem is redundant because somewhere I guess the point I want to make isn't clear or sharp enough.